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Another day of Peace and Quiet?

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Looking up, I see the clear blue sky, the ever so radiant sun, and lastly the fluffy clouds. This brought me a sense of bliss, after this sensation came the urge to take a nap. Should I even be taking a nap right now?
"Well, I deal with the consequences when I do get caught lazing around."
Then, I felt my nose tickle from the cool summer breeze.
"Ah~ I really can't get enough of this feeling. Whoever created this world, I must say you did one hell of a good job." as I say this. a bone crushing of pain travels across my stomach.
I slowly open one of my eye to see just who was assaulting me out of nowhere. It was none other than my younger sister, who just happens to be smiling like an idiot.
"Big Bro! Wake up!" her voice was loud enough to make my ears bleed. For the love of, why does everyone. I know tend to raise their voice so loud. My train of thoughts were brought to a halt when my sister started to violently slap me across my face.
"Big Bro! Wake up already! Mom wanted me to call you back in for lunch." after hearing what she had to say, I grabbed my sister's ever slapping hand and gently rub my face.
"Sophie, next time you wake me up. Try to be more gentle and not slap me across my face like a maniac" I gave her a glare. Knowing what the glare meant she immediately got off of me.
"Sorry Big Bro," she started to tear up, making me feel like the villain here. I know she did all those painful things with good intentions but still it hurts....very much. Whoever created this world, why did you have to give me a innocent yet very violent younger sister.
"Sigh~ I know you did all those things with good intentions...but next time just try not to slap me ok?" I starting to sound like my mom....that is absolutely not good but meh who cares as long as she stops feeling sad.
"I understand, Big Bro. I won't do it again" she smiled at me, making me feel rather happy.
"Now you said Mom said lunch was ready right?" I lifted her up and gently carried her. As she sat on my shoulder, I started to walk towards the small yet colorful house not far from our location.
"Yeah, also she said she was making spaghetti with lots of meatballs," I could feel the excitement in my younger sister's voice.
"Good to know," as I say this I felt another wave of summer breeze which once again tickled my nose.
"Hey Sophie," I called her name.
"Yeah, Big Bro?" she answered me in her usual cheerful tone.
"Wanna go fishing later?" I asked her.
"Sure, Big Bro!" she shouted out her answer making me feel at peace. I gently lift her up again and set her down beside me, we held hands and walked into the colorful house.
"We're back." we both said as I wish for these peaceful days to continue on.

This is just me practicing to write scenes. Tell me if I made mistakes so I know where to improve myself on.
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GLAD0Sisaspy's avatar
what lovely imagery. Some of your punctuation is a bit off, for example "For the love of, why does everyone. I know tend to raise their voice so loud" is a bit of a sentence fragment. Something like "For the love of (insert subject here example: God), why does everyone I know tend to raise their voice so loud." would flow a bit better, sentences that are too long aren't good but ones that are too short aren't good either.